Cosmetic surgery essay help!?

Have a look at the way articles in good quality newspapers start. They launch straight into the argument in a few words, and capture the essence of the story in two or three sentences. For example, they might say "Most cosmetic surgery is unnecessary and carries a great risk of death and disfigurement, yet despite these drawbacks over one million people spend up to $10 million a year having cosmetic procedures.The most common are " etc etc. (I just made up all the 'facts' in that previous sentence.) The good thing about this type of introduction is that it attracts the reader's attention immediately, so that your first hurdle as a writer is over. Make sure you use correct academic content and references though or you could get in trouble.